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Posted by Lysandra on 10-03-2009 at04:04:

Not a chapter

@ Ba_al: Yes it is...and yes they are...lol I was all ready planning to do that anyway... I just need everyone's name and addresses. And I need to find a publisher. Oh and the time to properly edit book one *sigh* I need another week off...lol

@ DJ: Working on it...lol. And yes, yes I know..lol.

@ Diablo: Haha, thanks. And that's not for a while yet still. At least 4 or 5 more chapters. Tongue

@ Raz: Mwahaha, you're all at my mercy...I mean...lol. Uh...I don't think that'll be happening. But there will eventually be a funny scene with Aries and bus. Tongue

@GT: Orgasm on a page? LOL. I could SO take that comment and stick it in my sig and people would be like:"WTF?" LOL. But thanks Smile

Uh...so far the only zombie summoner is Abby so DJ would know it's a zombie...lol Suddenly, this reminds me of the song by Voltaire...LOL.

In general:
I've got a lot of work to do this weekend with writing stuff for work so I'm not sure if I'll be able to get to the next chapter to actually get it up for Monday. Though I can say there will be more reference to the zombies. I kind of like Annie, Fred and Bob...lol. More poor notebook...so illegibal and unorganized...lol.

Posted by Lysandra on 10-12-2009 at17:33:

Chapter 8A

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Posted by Lysandra on 10-12-2009 at17:44:

Chapter 8B

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Posted by Raxis on 10-12-2009 at17:52:

Zombie vs Vampire apocalypse heading our way Tongue

Posted before second half was up

Posted by Lysandra on 10-12-2009 at17:57:

LOL. Yes, three zombies vs 80 members of BoS, that'll go well...LOL.

I swear diablo must have a camera tap on me or something, when I checked to see who was on when I started posting, he wasn't there. When I checked after I finished posting, he appeared...lol Should i be worried? lol.... wait... that happened with you too Raxis... hm. I should check my room for weird blinking lights or something...lol

Posted by Raxis on 10-12-2009 at18:02:

Haha I am ghosting, so it's a little different.

Hehe she could raise more... I thought that was implied in the previous half

Posted by Lysandra on 10-12-2009 at18:06:

Ah that makes sense...lol.

Well yes, but that wouldn't be very fair now would it? I mean the Alliance + XXX amount of zombies vs 80 members of BoS? And...I think both sides would die from the stench alone of that many zombies...LOL.

Posted by foxy9 on 10-12-2009 at18:12:

Read first half so far and its good, need to read 2nd + also need to read the att on Coven part

Posted by Lysandra on 10-13-2009 at02:24:

Chapter 9A

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Posted by Lysandra on 10-13-2009 at02:36:

Chapter 9B

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Posted by *GayTiger* on 10-13-2009 at07:42:

Frown

so beautiful Tongue

i quite like abby - "her fred" tis somewhat sweet
DJ's part was quite amusing, is it necro if you're technically dead yourself? Tongue

once again, just amazing, multiple orgasms on a page, i look forward to the rest and seeing what abby has planned Big Grin

Posted by Hespera on 10-13-2009 at15:26:

Somehow missed the last installment and had a lot of reading to catch up on! Well done as usual but I do have a bit of a complaint. I don't think you should have told us when you are going to wake up. That's like a spoiler! I think we all want/know you are going to wake up...but I would rather read and be surprised then know exactly when in advance. Other then that everything is great.

Posted by Ba_al on 10-13-2009 at17:26:

“Put that on blondie...hey, you’re a natural blond.”

brilliant Smile

cant wait for next chapters.....let there be WAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! argh and stuff

Posted by *GayTiger* on 10-13-2009 at20:53:

quote:

Originally posted by Ba_al
“Put that on blondie...hey, you’re a natural blond.”

that seems far too like DJ Tongue

Posted by Nemazis on 10-16-2009 at00:02:

Lys, you are evil, making me out to be a necro XD As usual, excellent read, and abit of humour aswell XD

And this is a proposal to most of the stories (since i know most everyone seems to be reading this at the moment) but can't a mod like... iunno, once a story is completed, then either delete all the comments made by other people (beacuse it's kinda distracting for others who wanna just go through) or make it possible to hide comments from all but the starter. As i said, would be useful for anyone who just wants to read the stories, no interruptions. (i KNOW popeye is reading this story, so at least SOME mod will see this sub-par useful comment)

Posted by *GayTiger* on 10-16-2009 at07:49:

quote:

Originally posted by Nemazis
Lys, you are evil, making me out to be a necro XD As usual, excellent read, and abit of humour aswell XD

And this is a proposal to most of the stories (since i know most everyone seems to be reading this at the moment) but can't a mod like... iunno, once a story is completed, then either delete all the comments made by other people (beacuse it's kinda distracting for others who wanna just go through) or make it possible to hide comments from all but the starter. As i said, would be useful for anyone who just wants to read the stories, no interruptions. (i KNOW popeye is reading this story, so at least SOME mod will see this sub-par useful comment)

your post is hypocritical, way to add another post for people to read when thewy dont want interuptions -.-'
if you care that much copy and paste to word document.

Posted by Ba_al on 10-16-2009 at09:00:

quote:

Originally posted by *GayTiger*

quote:

Originally posted by Nemazis
Lys, you are evil, making me out to be a necro XD As usual, excellent read, and abit of humour aswell XD

And this is a proposal to most of the stories (since i know most everyone seems to be reading this at the moment) but can't a mod like... iunno, once a story is completed, then either delete all the comments made by other people (beacuse it's kinda distracting for others who wanna just go through) or make it possible to hide comments from all but the starter. As i said, would be useful for anyone who just wants to read the stories, no interruptions. (i KNOW popeye is reading this story, so at least SOME mod will see this sub-par useful comment)

your post is hypocritical, way to add another post for people to read when thewy dont want interuptions -.-'
if you care that much copy and paste to word document.

aye straight-tiger is right

thats whats ive done with first and will do with second........plus its nice to see what others think of the story aswell

Posted by Nemazis on 10-16-2009 at15:22:

I never said i cared that much, i just said it for the sake of it being an idea. And sorry, i find white on a dark blue background alot less painful than black on a white background.

@Ba-al: I did say if they could do it (which now, i'll just assume it was a crappy idea) then you could turn comments on-off (exception = thread starter, maybe mods aswell)

And for now, i shall stop commenting.

Posted by Lysandra on 10-18-2009 at20:02:

Chapter 10A

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Posted by Lysandra on 10-18-2009 at20:17:

Chapter 10B

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Posted by Ba_al on 10-18-2009 at21:32:

RE: Chapter 10B

cant wait for next chptr and waaaaaaar

plus what the hell is abby is trying to summon lol
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as for AOD cant say much about them yet lol

though anguish is cool with the whole blindness/super hearing thing

and how he can "see" lol....reminds me of the film "daredevil"

Posted by Lysandra on 10-18-2009 at21:40:

lol. Thanks Ba_al. And we'll see. It'll be something big and nasty though, I can say that. and technically, you can tell that seeing as even black powder alone is deadly. Wink

I...never saw/read Daredevil actually. I was thinking more Spiderman with the spidey senses...LOL. I just thought it would be cool to have a blind vampire with super hearing really....lol. I can't remeber anyone else doing something with a blind vampire.

Posted by Ba_al on 10-18-2009 at21:47:

in daredevil
the main hero is blind but can use the soundwaves to make out pictures and effectivly see

pretty much what i taught of reading bout anguish

Posted by Raxis on 10-18-2009 at22:41:

I agree on the daredevil comment.

Anguish is my favourite character so far in the story actually.

And by the way Lys, Sasuke, well you've pretty much got his attitude in RL nailed with his character Tongue

Oh yeah. and it was good Big Grin

Posted by *GayTiger* on 10-19-2009 at21:44:

can raxis be killed now?
he shot the pedobear, he's done his job, all must die
muahahahaha
oh and kill diablo, possibly make it so it's mortis, thinking diablo is an intruder, and running him through with a huge blade, at which point diablo kills him almost as a reflex action Tongue

i want death and mayhem
muahahah

Posted by Lysandra on 10-19-2009 at21:56:

quote:

Originally posted by *GayTiger*
can raxis be killed now?
he shot the pedobear, he's done his job, all must die
muahahahaha
oh and kill diablo, possibly make it so it's mortis, thinking diablo is an intruder, and running him through with a huge blade, at which point diablo kills him almost as a reflex action Tongue

i want death and mayhem
muahahah

o.O WHA???
Okay.. hold on here...lol.

1) Why is Aries a pedobear? (I'm assuming that's who you mean with that...) and...why does Raxis die if his job is done? And who says he doesn't have another job to do? hehe....

2) Um... I think Mortis would recognize diablo...lol. but that does sound really funny...lol. I don't think I can work that in though, sorry.

3) Death and mayhem as well as a plot twist is coming shortly. I'm about half way done chapter 11, just need to finish it off and do a bit of editing. Should be finished it tonight (or edited the first part) so you might get half a chapter before I go to sleep tonight...lol. might. I'm kind of...jet lagged today, didn't get a good sleep.

The good news is, the rest is basically war, fighting, blood, mayhem and what not until one side or the other is forced into submission or completly killed or what not. So that's about...70 pages of fighting, one on one. I also have a few more pair ups for the actual battle played out so...yeah. And I now know what exactly Abby is summoning now (though I'm not telling anyone that...hehe) where I didn't before...haha.

Anyway, I'll be back later probably.

Posted by *GayTiger* on 10-20-2009 at07:13:

quote:

Originally posted by Lysandra

quote:

Originally posted by *GayTiger*
can raxis be killed now?
he shot the pedobear, he's done his job, all must die
muahahahaha
oh and kill diablo, possibly make it so it's mortis, thinking diablo is an intruder, and running him through with a huge blade, at which point diablo kills him almost as a reflex action Tongue

i want death and mayhem
muahahah

o.O WHA???
Okay.. hold on here...lol.

1) Why is Aries a pedobear? (I'm assuming that's who you mean with that...) and...why does Raxis die if his job is done? And who says he doesn't have another job to do? hehe....

2) Um... I think Mortis would recognize diablo...lol. but that does sound really funny...lol. I don't think I can work that in though, sorry.

3) Death and mayhem as well as a plot twist is coming shortly. I'm about half way done chapter 11, just need to finish it off and do a bit of editing. Should be finished it tonight (or edited the first part) so you might get half a chapter before I go to sleep tonight...lol. might. I'm kind of...jet lagged today, didn't get a good sleep.

The good news is, the rest is basically war, fighting, blood, mayhem and what not until one side or the other is forced into submission or completly killed or what not. So that's about...70 pages of fighting, one on one. I also have a few more pair ups for the actual battle played out so...yeah. And I now know what exactly Abby is summoning now (though I'm not telling anyone that...hehe) where I didn't before...haha.

Anyway, I'll be back later probably.

aries is pedobear for hunting poor lonely female, i says raxis has no more jobs Tongue

and they dont have to kill eachhother Big Grin

it's an amazing piece of work lys Smile

i know some places that do small scale book publishing, and i'd be more than happy to buy a book at whatever price you weere asking if you decided to get it published Smile

Posted by Lysandra on 10-25-2009 at20:25:

Chapter 11A

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Posted by Lysandra on 10-25-2009 at20:37:

Chatper 11B

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Posted by Nemazis on 10-25-2009 at21:27:

Whoa, now you can kick ass without actually having to kick their ass XD Also, wth? Diablo = Raxis father? Now your *$%^%@# with us >_<

Posted by Ba_al on 10-25-2009 at21:29:

RE: Chapter 11A

bloody hell that was unexpected...damn lol

anguish is rapidly becoming my fav char(besides mine ofc ) lol

and leaving the chapter with raxis and diablo

u big meanie lolz......................

i humbly await the next chpt

Posted by Raxis on 10-26-2009 at02:38:

Anguish is definately my favourite character... though I told you that in game didn't I Lys Tongue

Hehe... nice end... but... aaaahh

Posted by Lysandra on 10-26-2009 at15:13:

Responding to comments...

@ DJ: lol, yep I can kick butt without needing to move...LOL. Hehe, I knew that would get a lot of people, the whole Diablo = Raxis's father... I love my plot twists.

@Ba_al: Oddly, he's becoming one of my favs too. yes, I am a big meanie... I think I said that somewhere all ready...LOL. Next chapter should be up by Monday night (for me, late night/early morning for UK time) so yeah.

@ Raxis: Yes you did...lol. We had a discussion about Anguish and what not in game...LOL. Oh come on, you called it...LOL. You said he'd either be your teacher or your father. Now I get to give you and diablo a back story...lol.

in general: There will be a few more plot twists/WTH? moments in later chapters more then likely, but...I'm not telling you when or where...haha.

Also, since the next....5 chapters or so will be battle scenes, don't expect all the plot twists to be resolved ASAP....meaning, yes, Abby and Aries may be AWOL for a bit, and the explaination behind Diablo and Raxis may not come right away. Same with anything else that comes up, it may not be explained till near the very end of the book so you folks will have to be patient.

The good news is, I have the last chapter(s) planned out so I just have to write battle scenes and finish it off. Hopefully by the new year, this one will be done. More then likely sooner then January but yeah.

Anyway, I'm going back to work now...lol

Posted by Raxis on 10-26-2009 at16:49:

RE: Responding to comments...

quote:

Originally posted by Lysandra
@ DJ: lol, yep I can kick butt without needing to move...LOL. Hehe, I knew that would get a lot of people, the whole Diablo = Raxis's father... I love my plot twists.

@Ba_al: Oddly, he's becoming one of my favs too. yes, I am a big meanie... I think I said that somewhere all ready...LOL. Next chapter should be up by Monday night (for me, late night/early morning for UK time) so yeah.

@ Raxis: Yes you did...lol. We had a discussion about Anguish and what not in game...LOL. Oh come on, you called it...LOL. You said he'd either be your teacher or your father. Now I get to give you and diablo a back story...lol.

in general: There will be a few more plot twists/WTH? moments in later chapters more then likely, but...I'm not telling you when or where...haha.

Also, since the next....5 chapters or so will be battle scenes, don't expect all the plot twists to be resolved ASAP....meaning, yes, Abby and Aries may be AWOL for a bit, and the explaination behind Diablo and Raxis may not come right away. Same with anything else that comes up, it may not be explained till near the very end of the book so you folks will have to be patient.

The good news is, I have the last chapter(s) planned out so I just have to write battle scenes and finish it off. Hopefully by the new year, this one will be done. More then likely sooner then January but yeah.

Anyway, I'm going back to work now...lol

I wasn't being serious. You said there was a connection so I went for the most far out reasoning it could be Tongue

Hehe I did the same with Orphan

Posted by Lysandra on 11-01-2009 at21:36:

Chapter 12A

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Posted by Hespera on 11-04-2009 at19:14:

I'm all caught up in reading now Smile

Like the battle so far, looking forward to next installment!

Posted by Lysandra on 11-08-2009 at17:50:

Chapter 12B

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Posted by spawnraloom on 11-08-2009 at18:27:

very nice Big Grin

can't wait for the next chapter Big Grin

i kinda feel sorry for Lestat though

Posted by Nemazis on 11-08-2009 at20:43:

Lol flying mallet completely destroyed Garat_Jax's head. I wonder what that woulda looked like... heh, detonated like C4 XD

Posted by Lysandra on 11-08-2009 at21:54:

Chapter 13A

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