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Posted by Veritatis Splendor on 02-17-2013 at02:43:

  Elizabeth inquisitor text

`Pathetic bloodsucker!`, shouted the ghost of Elisabeth when yet another blow pierced her spectre body. You wanted to strike again but an inner voice told you it wouldn`t be needed. Green-blue beams gushed out of her body and covered you like a halo. Very painful halo. You closed your eyes and endured the suffering bestowed on you by the ghost. After a while your torment ended. You slowly opened your eyes to see that it was gone. Only a trail of smoke remained of the Inquisitor and even it was slowly blown away by the wind.

I feel it should be with minor changes;

`Pathetic bloodsucker!`, shouted the ghost of Elisabeth as yet another blow pierced her spectral body. You wanted to strike again but an inner voice told you it wouldn`t be needed. Green-blue beams gushed out of her body and covered you like a halo. A very painful halo. You closed your eyes and endured the suffering bestowed upon you by the ghost. After a while your torment ended. You slowly opened your eyes to see that it was gone. Only a trail of smoke remained of the Inquisitor and even then it was slowly blown away by the wind.

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Posted by Szeszej on 02-17-2013 at17:18:

 

Fixed