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Nicely done
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Let's see... Natedogg or Igor vs me... I'm dead, ain't i? XD
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Raxis
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DJ i get diablo... think how I feel, i'll be turned into a pair of fishnets
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as good as ever
cant wait to see a bos vs alliance dual
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@ DJ: you have fire magic remember? Igor and Nate don't. So technically, you're magic puts you on equal standing with them...kind of...lol.
@ Raxis: hehe, fishnets...LOL and thanks. 
@ Ba_al: that won't be for a while yet... we will get to see a Coven Vs. BoS duel in chapter 7ish though. 
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Lys, shooting very mini fireballs that chances are, they'll see AS SOON as i shoot them, dodge, grab it mid-flight, and shove it up my OWN ass within 1/2 a second of it flying from my bow, REALLY doesn't put me on equal standings with them. More or less it'll help me singe myself and seal my butt-hole over >_<
And WHERE IS THE SECOND PART OF THIS?!?!?! I'm bored, and need something to keep myself awake.
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Lol, well what else am i meant to do when i got no attacks, nothing is being posted on here, and almost every site i frequent i've already been on?
And meh, flaming arrows might aswell be mini fireballs, like flicking a flaming match at them XD
Oh yeah, not that i'd usually do this. But you spelt Scars as Scares
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hmm i wonder will la puce make it out of their alive lol
cant wait for next one
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Lol, well what else am i meant to do when i got no attacks, nothing is being posted on here, and almost every site i frequent i've already been on?
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What might they be 
Tis coming along smoothly... I can see this being better than the original
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@ Ba_al: Yep. He will, he's mentioned as almost killing Llianna in the epilogue remember? lol.
@ Raxis: Hence, the me editing the first book. I figure I'll add about 20 pages to it just on adding characterization and details.
@DJ: responded in game..ish.
In general: haha, sparkly vampires...LOL.
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lys... that was amazing, it's pure orgasm on a page!
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errr i knew that ....yeah ofc i knew that hehehehe
i was just testing you and congratz you passed ..*looks round nervously* hehehe
yeah just a test lol
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Raxis
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Nifty... why isn't it five thumbs up?
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ooh that chapter was fun to read
lol @hyper goin blind
@Raxis give it time man..twill be 5 thumbs up soon enough.
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MOREEEE
WE WANT MOREEE
it's amazing
the drama of the next chapter!
must see
and lol @ blind vamp
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bwahahahaha
fred and bob ahahahahahahha
hehe bring on the next chapter and the battle mwahahaha
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and i wonder am i as warmongering in the game as i am in the story lol *starts to ponder* hmmmmmmmmm
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Hehe wait for the Zombies to turn into Lycans
Good second half, I think doing the nights in quick sequence actually cut through a lot of waffle that could've happened. It's getting more gripping to read
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DIE BOS DIE!!!!! 
I sense impending doom for my clan,especially knowing what was said at the end of book 1. All I can say is I hope to take out as many of you mofo's in Bos as possible in the process and that in the end you all die horrible painful deaths!
and with that said, good reading, carry on then
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Hespera, so much hatred against someone who never harmed you... 
BoS will take care of the alliance and if it has to be then we will kill!
May the Brotherhood prevail!
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Dude it's not my fault Lysandra is making you guys kill Coven! If I recall one of your men tortures and mutilates one of mine in the ending of book 1. Obviously I don't want Coven to just lie down and play dead and not have a good fight out of it. And either way it's still a good story so far even knowing bad stuff is about to go down.
Lys: It is a good story so far, and I look forward to reading whatever you have in store for everyone. Don't let my comments make you think otherwise...I'm just err getting into the story lol.
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The story is AWESOME! No matter how bad BoS will be, the story itself is great
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Damn Lys this is pretty cool
However I am now in a predicament
I have to vote that they take each other out - or learn to hug each other and get along with life
I am a member of BOS (Although in the Story I'm with Dark) so I hope for BOS to win
However you and I have had a far reaching relationship right back when we have about 30 points to our name - so for that I want Dark to win
Why are such things so hard.
On a side note I should have me next chapter posted in about one week
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Seriously, out of ALL names you could give zombies... why such PLAIN names XD
Anywho, DEATH TO DIABLO, DEATH TO MORTIS!!! And kill BoS while your at it
EDIT: Watch lys put in some CRAZY twist, like BoS vs Alliance, after they've nearly ravaged the city, someone realises Vladimir is Puce, and he caused everything. Then they double team on him and his league of spies XD
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LOL you people are insane...I love it so much...lol
@Ba_al: Well, I wanted 3 distinct leader personalities: a war-monger, a laid back attitude and ...well, whatever you would consider Hepsera. To me, she's like what I am, kind of a..protector of her whole clan. Kind of...the "mother" to them...if you will...in a way... or something.
@ Raxis Nope, no Lycans...yet. Who knows, Abby might summon some undead werewolves or something. And yeah, I didn't want to make another split of a chapter so I cut out a lot of... fluff to get through those nights quickly.
@ Hespera: for some reason, that made me laugh when I first read it...I don't know why. I think I just pictured you getting really excited about war and combined it weird with the fact I watch too much anime....yeah...lol. don't ask, my brother's insanity is finally getting to me. I also love that you seem to be the only one remembering the epilogue of book 1...lol. But yeah, Natedogg tortures Alarain I believe... Maida gets her legs chopped off, Hyper loses an arm...I can't remember what else right now but it's all in the epilogue.
@ Diablo: hey, you're not evil, you're being manipulated by Aries into thinking the Alliance is evil and you have to kill them (er us) off in order to get peace. So..ha. And yes, I'm having a great time writing it... Once I watch another few hours of House MD, I'll uh...oo...lungs filling with fluid in that episode...hm... er...*coughs*
@ Raz: You could just be like me and vote for neither side...LOL. Of course, I all ready know how it all ends...lol. Haha, yeah. We started our clans within like... an hour of each other or something right? LOL. Ah good times.
And WOOOT! I've been waiting for your next chapter.
@ DJ: Hey, you named a dragon Jimmy, shush. And a six year old child wouldn't think of complicated names. (I'm refering to Abby btw
) Haha...lol. Actually... there are a few crazy...not so much twists per se...just some...interesting circumstances.
And...I'm going to go back to my crazy House MD obsession now...
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Ba_al
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excellent chapter............the war is finaaly upon us mwahhaahah
and looks like bob and fred are getting more popular (^_-)
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oh wow how long it take you to write all this
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Nemazis
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Lys, you MUST find someone who will publish this into an official book XD
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I've always told you where you need to post this story.
Webook - also you can submit it and if good enough - they will also publish your book
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Nemazis
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Lys, if you post it on there, and it gets published, then you've GOTTA send all of the common readers a free edition of the book
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Great!
Btw, am I the only one who wants Lysandra to finally wake up?!
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Lys, if you post it on there, and it gets published, then you've GOTTA send all of the common readers a free edition of the book
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yes defo
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