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Batmystique
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Havent had a chance 2 read all parts but from what i have read so far....really good work. U should really try & find an editor. It wont hurt just 2 try....
Keep the gr8 work coming!!!!
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08-25-2008 09:55 |
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airliebird
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Registration Date: 02-10-2008
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Location: Hull , England Race in game: Beastmaster Clan: scurvy dog
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i looked and saw part nine was missing i can't wait to see what i have to look forward to in the next installment
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09-13-2008 00:39 |
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Lysandra
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Registration Date: 01-11-2008
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Location: Canada Race in game: Beastmaster
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Okay, just to let everyone know this is on a break of sorts until I can get some time to acutally work on it. I don't even have much time to edit as it stands, let alone work on the next part.
I appologize in advance for the wait.
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Originally posted by *GayTiger*
lys... that was amazing, it's pure orgasm on a page!
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09-25-2008 17:46 |
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Nemazis
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Registration Date: 04-10-2008
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Location: England, London Race in game: Absorber Clan: Badger
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Fortunately i only look here very little until i usually see your name (because it means you've updated usually) so i got no worries, but UPDATE FASTER, I NEED SOMETHING TO KILL TIME!!! Well... other than the usual -.-
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09-25-2008 22:16 |
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Madamme_Mina
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Registration Date: 05-13-2008
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Very skilled writing.
Thanks for sharing.
MM
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09-26-2008 11:14 |
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Bat
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Registration Date: 07-23-2008
Posts: 124
Location: Estonia Race in game: Beastmaster
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Nice nice ,,, keep it going
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11-08-2008 11:19 |
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Lysandra
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Chapter ten in full form is up...finally....lol. They seem to be getting longer
or is that just me??
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Originally posted by *GayTiger*
lys... that was amazing, it's pure orgasm on a page!
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11-13-2008 18:03 |
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Pops
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Registration Date: 10-22-2008
Posts: 652
Location: england Race in game: Absorber Clan: BoS
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excellent work lysandra, you truely have a gift
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11-18-2008 06:25 |
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Pops
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Registration Date: 10-22-2008
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Location: england Race in game: Absorber Clan: BoS
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its not multiposting now
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11-19-2008 11:19 |
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Pops
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Registration Date: 10-22-2008
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Location: england Race in game: Absorber Clan: BoS
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cant wait, where do you think of this stuff?
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11-19-2008 18:09 |
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Lysandra
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Originally posted by popeye2k8
cant wait, where do you think of this stuff? |
See now everyone's going to think I posted something...LOL.
and no idea. I literally sit down in front of my laptop, read what the last few paragraphs of the previous chapter and start typing. that's why when i do get writers block I normally can't get out of it because i'm not a regular writer who plans things out.
Actually, the few novels i did try to plan out I won't touch because there's too much planning now...lol. i figured out that i like writing on the laptop instead of pen to paper, much easier to change and planning can be done on the fly.
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Originally posted by *GayTiger*
lys... that was amazing, it's pure orgasm on a page!
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11-19-2008 18:28 |
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Pops
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Registration Date: 10-22-2008
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Location: england Race in game: Absorber Clan: BoS
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excellent work, lysandra. just added inspiration to something im working on at the moment....
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11-22-2008 03:25 |
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Lestat666
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Location: Canada Race in game: Absorber Clan: NIGHT
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oh thanks sis, kill me off...lol well not reli kill but hurted me reli bad.
an uh yeah....bout the city design..i got buildings...LOL. stuck on street placement thou...culd take me a while...no1 hold der breath.
*loves dat he's at an advantage 2 evr1 else an can read the story b4 it gets posted
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11-23-2008 18:36 |
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Bat
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Registration Date: 07-23-2008
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Location: Estonia Race in game: Beastmaster
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So Lestat work faster if u dont want lys to kill u in next story xD
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11-25-2008 07:52 |
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Lestat666
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Originally posted by Bat
So Lestat work faster if u dont want lys to kill u in next story xD |
naw she wuldnt acutally kill me off.... rite sis?? RITE??? *gets worried*
lol. street placement is hard...i aint eva done a city map b4.
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11-25-2008 12:44 |
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“And we gotta read all this stuff?” AudatiousTitan said
that would happen in rl, lmao
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11-26-2008 23:12 |
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Raxis
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The seemed completely unharmed. |
I was on the edge of my seat.... but I want to knwo WHAT WAS COMPLETELY UNHARMED lol
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12-05-2008 01:02 |
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llianna
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Registration Date: 02-09-2008
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Location: Scotland Race in game: Cursed One Clan: B.O.S
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Hmmm..interesting! I do make a good spy, don't I just....LOL
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12-05-2008 18:54 |
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Mortis
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It's getting better and better
Do you have it one file available for download?
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12-05-2008 18:57 |
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llianna
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I do really need a full copy once it is finished...
I am sure I can make arrangements so you can post it a local address in Canada...=P
And girl, you are good!!! I think we should find you an editor and a publisher...
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12-05-2008 21:42 |
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Lysandra
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Sorry, not an update.... actually I hit another road block and got a bit lost on how to work the end of the chapter with DeathJam, AudatiousTitan, Angelis, Anastasia, DeathMagick and Lestat.
Could take a bit seeing as I have no motivation to do much writing for anything...again.
@Llianna- LOL. You play a very important role in this actually, I think in two more chapters will be the second meeting between La Puce and Lestat and since you're following La Puce...
I have to count nights after that chaper, see if I'm right or not...lol. Everyone tells me that, I should go look for one.
@Mortis- it's not even close to being done yet...lol. And nope, there's no where (except on my laptop) that has a file of what's done...lol. I don't even have a site to post it on anymore seeing as I forgot my log in to *somesite* that allows posting of stories and such.
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Originally posted by *GayTiger*
lys... that was amazing, it's pure orgasm on a page!
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12-09-2008 00:37 |
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Raxis
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Registration Date: 12-12-2007
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@Mortis- it's not even close to being done yet...lol. And nope, there's no where (except on my laptop) that has a file of what's done...lol. I don't even have a site to post it on anymore seeing as I forgot my log in to *somesite* that allows posting of stories and such.
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yes there is a place except your laptop... HERE
Also back it up!
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12-09-2008 03:04 |
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Pops
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i like the hand to hand combat. ooh good stuff.
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12-16-2008 23:57 |
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Raxis
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Hmmm I like it.... but I disagree with Popeye a littl (Probably the perfectionist in me) would be awesome to see though...
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Lol don't make me find it
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12-17-2008 02:45 |
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Raxis
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12-17-2008 03:55 |
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Lysandra
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Location: Canada Race in game: Beastmaster
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12-17-2008 04:00 |
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