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bobalob57
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lol i didnt call you a guy lysandra [check i spelt it write]
youv got us on a knife edge now, wheres the next bit?
+your more populer than la puce now 
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Ba_al
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hehe i knew u would slip zauborin in there somewhere lol 
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Mortis
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Let the battle begin!
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Pops
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nice battle scene lys. cant wait for the finale
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Mortis
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Blood, we want more blood!
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02-11-2009 23:14 |
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Raxis
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Lol.... What about us? Waaaaaah
Lol... this is getting really godd again
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Mortis
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Excellent so far. Great battle 
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02-12-2009 16:18 |
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Raxis
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This is great.... lol though it was anyway.... I'm getting drawn int othe bleeding thing
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bobalob57
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very good, liking the way everyone goes sick at the end...
will you post the unbloodwars thing here as well so we have something to read?
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02-17-2009 00:06 |
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Lysandra
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Originally posted by bobalob57
very good, liking the way everyone goes sick at the end...
will you post the unbloodwars thing here as well so we have something to read? |
haha, i was quite fond of that too...lol. Especially Kraftie's he went insane.
I should, it would get me to write it faster. I'm not sure if I can though... it's still got vampires mind you, just slightly different ones. And some parts are going to be rather...uh... 18+ And it's probably going to be about three times longer than this, if not more. And that's just the first bit of a triology...haha.
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lys... that was amazing, it's pure orgasm on a page!
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02-17-2009 00:11 |
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Mortis
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Yeah, more bloodshed..
Crush them ALL!!
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02-17-2009 00:12 |
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bobalob57
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Originally posted by Lysandra
I should, it would get me to write it faster. I'm not sure if I can though... it's still got vampires mind you, just slightly different ones. And some parts are going to be rather...uh... 18+ And it's probably going to be about three times longer than this, if not more. And that's just the first bit of a triology...haha. |
if you warn people about the 18+bits then it should be ok, i think that other people have done stories that fit into that context and people didnt mind
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02-17-2009 00:40 |
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Raxis
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Lol I must admit I'm sharing mortis' bloodthirst
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02-17-2009 01:41 |
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Lysandra
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@ mortis, you just want me to crush them all so BoS can take over the city...LOL.
@ Bob, true....lol
@ Raxis...LOL. Remember, you're the one almost out of ammo
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lys... that was amazing, it's pure orgasm on a page!
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02-17-2009 01:51 |
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Raxis
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Yeh I know I die
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02-17-2009 02:26 |
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Hespera
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Whoa when you said sorry at the beginning I thought for sure I was dying here, didn't think you'd be taking out my crew, lol. Good action though and everyone going crazy was cool. A good battle so far
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02-17-2009 04:14 |
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Pops
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woo bloodbath. more please
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02-17-2009 05:52 |
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Mortis
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Damn.. really great battle and fights, as for La Puce.. real surprise I must say..
wasn't expecting anything like that.. now waiting for the epilogue..
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02-20-2009 01:16 |
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U kno u are sending me this in a word document right?
I find it hard to read on the net
im still not done 
catching up tho
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02-21-2009 09:54 |
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minshres
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ya a word document copy would be great. i cannot seem to read in web either :/
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Pops
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excellenty ending lys ive enjoyed reading this all the way through
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02-21-2009 15:52 |
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Raxis
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NOw book II
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02-22-2009 01:07 |
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Mortis
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Great finale and interesting epilogue. Excellent reading all the time.. really were enjoying it. Erm, as for BoS you made long way from mentioning us for a first time until ending situation..
Bah, fits good to the story, so no problem at all..
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makavelli
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whens the movie out
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02-23-2009 19:47 |
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Lysandra
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@ Titan and minshres: I'll be sending out e-mail copy to another player soon, I know titan's e-mail and yeah. Just give me e-mail and i can send it to you.
Or you could do what Ba_al did and copy paste it into notepad...LOL
@Popeye: aw thanks.
@Raxis and dtr: LOL. Jeez, I'm writing a different novel now so Book Two will take at least another year before I start getting around to it. I might end up mulit-tasking and doing both at once though. And i might open a thread for some other writings just so you guys don't get bored. I actually have a short story sitting in my documents, I have to fix it though...LOL
@ Mortis: I know...lol. Actually I had wanted some kind of threat for the ending because my orignal plan was to end it as I did, I was just lacking a threat... lol. Sorry for the rather insulting name though. To be honest, that was Lest's contribution to the story, he came up with insulting names and gave me help with writing La Puce and his character.
@makavelli and dtr: LOL. It's not technically published yet, let's try that first...LOL. I mean hell if they made a movie out of... I'll stop that one book tends to bring way too much contriversy... lol.
Jeez that was a lot of comments...lol
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lys... that was amazing, it's pure orgasm on a page!
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02-24-2009 00:16 |
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Nemazis
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Wow... just got back round to the story, and HOLY HELL WAS IT AWESOME!!! I can't wait for book two of this, and if this ever gets made into some sort of film or something, then i can safely say that i (vaugely) know you, and might get some profits =D
I kept grinning like an idiot when i saw my name (cause of habit) and YAY FOR MAGIC!
Sorry if classed as necro-posting, but i CAN'T exactly bump this (since it's stickied) nor will it affect much of the community, unless everyone goes on a rampage... oh wait, loads of people already did in here XD
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03-02-2009 23:20 |
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Bat
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umm its alright i guess , could have been better tho...nah im just kidding
it was AWESOME!... and i had magic xD + nice battles, now you have to find a movie maker
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llianna
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Hey! Lysandra....whatever happened to my copy????
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Lysandra
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I hate to do this, I really do. But, this is now a downloadable e-book, soon to be published in stores and yeah.
Can this entire thread be cleared out except for the first post and this last post? Also, I'm formerly requesting the entire thread for Book 2 be cleared out as well except for the first post.
If you want to find it online, let me know and I'll point you in the right direction. And no, it's not entirely the same anyway. Things have been added, names have been changed and what not, so yeah.
Sorry if this is considered necro posting...*cough*
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lys... that was amazing, it's pure orgasm on a page!
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Ba_al
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published ??
wooop
go lys
congrtz
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