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Mortis
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Registration Date: 05-01-2007
Posts: 1,159
Location: Prague, Czech Republic
Race in game: Absorber
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Your foe wielded a greatsword which he used as if it was a wooden toy. He struck blows so heavy the you almost got disarmed.

I guess it should be:

Your foe wielded a greatsword which he used as if it was a wooden toy. He struck blows so heavy that you almost got disarmed.

or maybe:

Your foe wielded a greatsword which he used as if it was a wooden toy. His blows were so heavy that you almost got disarmed.

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