 Song: The Fire Within |
Raxis
Set Abominae
Registration Date: 12-12-2007
Posts: 1,168
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When we have our EP out this should be on it.
(Breakdown already)
In the darkened night, when time stands still.
I see the light,
the eyes of death itself.
I feel him pull, upon my soul.
And then I die,
To be reborn
(verse)
From the ashes we will rise again,
And in the undying flames we know the way.
Never again to see,
Do not believe in we,
For the forsaken walk again.
(chorus)
Ashes to ashes,
Dust to dust,
All things die,
And turn to rust,
Should we die,
And rise again,
Then we will seek
The fire within....
(verse)
As the phoenix guides our path,
We seek a truth, beyond comprehension.
Never again to feel,
We hold the sacred seal,
A now you join us un our quest.
(chorus)
Ashes to ashes,
Dust to dust,
All things die,
And turn to rust,
Should we die,
And rise again,
Then we will seek
The fire within....
(Bridge)
As we seek,
As we quest,
We find the source,
Of all knowledge....
(Solo)
(chorus x 2)
Ashes to ashes,
Dust to dust,
All things die,
And turn to rust,
Should we die,
And rise again,
Then we will seek
The fire within....
The Fire Within (Falcetto scream - think heavy metal)
Well what do people think, this was the first song we wrote, so we decided we would use it... I wrote the lyrics, my guitarist wrote the guitar parts, and the rest was written as a joint effort, and now the band is complete 
So yeh any thoughts
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10-10-2008 17:05 |
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Lysandra
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Registration Date: 01-11-2008
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Location: Canada
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I like it. The chorus is really catchy.
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lys... that was amazing, it's pure orgasm on a page!
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10-11-2008 14:20 |
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Raxis
Set Abominae
Registration Date: 12-12-2007
Posts: 1,168
Race in game: Beastmaster
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we are makign some changes, the lyrical hook in the verse isn't quite right... still all songs need to improve, unless they are in the list which I cannot be bothered to list
Will probably put more songs on here, but we own all the rights to them, so I can without worry of people stealing them
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