Pops
moderator...apparently
Registration Date: 10-22-2008
Posts: 652
Location: england Race in game: Absorber Clan: BoS
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Act 3 vicinity quest, knowledge
From the uppermost apartment you could see the panorama of the City and the Blood Bank. You knew the layout of the building at the timetable of the guards. Two bodyguards on the roof were no challenge for you. You waited until you could see a guard in the window on the floor where you had installed an alarm.
at should be "and"
Act 3 vicinity, appearance
The main hall was filed with vampires. In the middle of the crowd stood the speaker who, flailing his hands vividly, tried to convince others to his scheme.
` .. is unable to lead,` he shouted. `All he ever does is walking round and round the City and inviting more herd!`
All he ever does is walking round and round should be "all he ever does is walk around and around"
__________________ No, you didn't imagine it, I DID just go there
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