Veritatis Splendor
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Registration Date: 03-07-2011
Posts: 93
Location: Necropolis Race in game: Cursed One Clan: QTD
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`Pathetic bloodsucker!`, shouted the ghost of Elisabeth when yet another blow pierced her spectre body. You wanted to strike again but an inner voice told you it wouldn`t be needed. Green-blue beams gushed out of her body and covered you like a halo. Very painful halo. You closed your eyes and endured the suffering bestowed on you by the ghost. After a while your torment ended. You slowly opened your eyes to see that it was gone. Only a trail of smoke remained of the Inquisitor and even it was slowly blown away by the wind.
I feel it should be with minor changes;
`Pathetic bloodsucker!`, shouted the ghost of Elisabeth as yet another blow pierced her spectral body. You wanted to strike again but an inner voice told you it wouldn`t be needed. Green-blue beams gushed out of her body and covered you like a halo. A very painful halo. You closed your eyes and endured the suffering bestowed upon you by the ghost. After a while your torment ended. You slowly opened your eyes to see that it was gone. Only a trail of smoke remained of the Inquisitor and even then it was slowly blown away by the wind.
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Registration Date: 02-21-2007
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Location: Poland Clan: Overlords
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