Undivisible
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https://r1.bloodwars.net/showmsg.php?mid...&key=af960a9bf5
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The smell of magic was lingering on in the air for several hours. The tracks in the mud showed, that this must have been a new kind of trans-animal, a kind which you had never seen before.
The village was a cluster of tightly squeezed cottages. Wormlike creatures were crawling between the houses, looking for a way to get inside. Two fat specimens feasted on the corpse of one of the villagers. The lack of visible reproductive organs explained the strange smell of magic which accompanied the mutants. Some mad magician must have summoned them to replace him in his dirty work.
You descended from the hill. The worms didn’t trouble you much, they were too absorbed in their feast to even notice what killed them.
The sound of a cracking wood, and thin, childish squeak coming from a nearby orchard caught your attention. You jumped skilfully over the back of a worm that charged you, with a feline grace landed on the ground, and ran towards the trees.
Another two monsters barred your way. You repulsed the the attacker with your sword, and tried to strike the other one with your dagger, but you were too slow. The fight dragged on. The screams ceased.
When you dealt with your opponents, the girl had already been dead. After dealing with the rest of the monsters, it turned out that only three people managed to survive.
As you were leaving the village you could hear only screams despair, and a piercing sob.
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Red stuff seems to be missing, blue stuff is doubled, green stuff shouldn't be there.
EDIT: there's more where that came from. I'll keep posting in this thread to avoid spam
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Szeszej
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Thank you for your feedback, I'll take a look 
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Undivisible
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Registration Date: 07-25-2008
Posts: 233
Location: Ladek-Zdroj
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https://r1.bloodwars.net/showmsg.php?mid...&key=d3d6413621
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You were walking through the sewers under the City. The image of Azar in a pool of blood was pulsing in your mind. On every fork you stopped, looking for possible tracks left by the assassin. Every, even the smallest, fragment of reality was like a puzzle piece with the word ‘Revenge’ on it.
A splash in front of you was the first warning. A moment later bullets from .50 Action Express started whistling around you. In the flash of the shots you saw the figure of the murderer. He seemed as if he barely had strength to hold two Desert Eagle pistols and the recoil was mercilessly jerking him.
A broad sword with demon Ragaziel trapped inside of it glimmered sinisterly in your hand.
You reached the midget in three leaps, and cut his hands with one blow. You saw a grimace of pleasure, and pain going through his face. Now you knew why it was him who had been chosen for the mission to kill Azar, no one would be able to effectively torture him.
The midget was looking with a mix of fear, and fascination and his bloody stumps.
’Whatcha gonna do now?’, he asked.
’I’ll take what is the most valuable to you’, you answered, twining the amulet of the ancient around your sword.
’Gerhart, this is your last chance to tell me who’ve sent you!’, you said.
The midget seemed to shrink even more when he heard his name from you.
’Where... how...?’
’How do I know what is your name? You think that the most famous assassin of the Inner Circle would escape my notice. Now talk, your time is running short’, death sentence sounded in your voice as you were finishing the sentence.
’Elisabeth, it was her!’, said the midget, his gums were trembling.
’Inquisitor Elisabeth?’, you asked with disbelief, ’What could she possible want from us?’
’I... I don’t know.'
The sword smoothly thrust in his body, between the chest, and the neck, and pierced his heart. The gladiators’ blow brought death quickly, and smoothly.
A half-real scream filled the sewers when Ragaziel, awakened by the power of the amulet, ate Gerhardt’s soul.
The assassin’s body was rotting in a rapid pace. Worms bustled about between the ribs, eating every, even the smallest, piece of body which had been resisting death for so long.
However, there was a bigger danger looming ahead. Despair had to give way to the instinctive need of safety, and survival. Somewhere there, in her stronghold, an Inquisitor of the Council was waiting for her assassin to return...
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Red stuff is missing, green stuff shoudn't be there, orange stuff is wrong. The word is: at. 
EDIT: miscolored stuff fixed
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Undivisible: 02-17-2020 08:52.
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Undivisible
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Registration Date: 07-25-2008
Posts: 233
Location: Ladek-Zdroj
Clan: HFTFlea
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| A2 successful easy intelligence quest |
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https://r1.bloodwars.net/showmsg.php?mid...&key=e37e0197c4
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It was a warm night. Toxic storm had moved south, revealing a starlit sky. You could hardly remember the last time you had seen them.
A strange, red mist was moving towards you. With a heavy heart you said farewell to the stars, and awaited another portion of stinking air.
The world whirled, twisted, weaved. Your mind reacted instinctively, processing the illusion into a net full of magical symbols. You began to reflexively draw unknown symbols, and with every consecutive symbol the runes of illusion blurred. When you finished with the last symbol, there was an explosion of mana north-east from you. Reality had returned, the mist had gone. You pulled out two Magnum revolvers, prepared especially for you, with handmade mother-of-pearl ornaments on the grip, and went to check who was going to die that day.
The mage was still stunned from the prematurely broken spell. His red robe was smouldering on the cuffs. Seeing you he didn’t even try to run, he pulled out a wooden staff instead, and began to draw signs with his left hand. You didn’t wait for the effect of the spell, the first bullet hit the mage in the chest, and the second one changed his head into a cracked watermelon.
You looted the corpse with curiosity, wanting to find information on his superiors. However, whoever it was, didn’t leave a single track.
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Undivisible
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https://r1.bloodwars.net/showmsg.php?mid...&key=1bb5de1ca5
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The visit in the wolfish lair was passing in an idyllic atmosphere. Werewolves, brutal and savage by nature, after several duels with you, accepted you into their pack. There were no great politics, or constant wars in here, unlike in most of the lairs of the Transformed in the City.
With every passing year, your son occupied higher and higher positions in the pack, first streaks of grey hair started to appear in his hair. Implacable time marked also his figure, his strong arms were a bit lowered and his back hunched.
Time was running, marking everyone around you, but avoiding like a sea wave avoiding rocks on a beach. Violet clouds were wandering in the sky. Stronger and stronger wind was tugging your cape.
A gale struck you unexpectedly. A moment later is started to hail, it was the size of hen eggs. You were very surprised at the sight of the lump of ice that had fallen just next to you: it was the size of a man’s fist. Screams of pain and bewilderment, occasional at first, began to intensify. You clenched your teeth with pain when one of the missiles hit your arm, and then, following the first one, many more balls of ice started striking your body. One of the nearby houses collapsed under the barrage of icy missiles, in another gaped a 15 inch hole. Near the tent of the shaman a large group of wolfmen gathered. They were armed to their teeth when the attack had started. You were surprised to see a very comely lad standing at the door of the tent.
’There’, he said and pointed at south-west, ’seek and destroy.’
A pack of werewolves, the size of a grizzly bear, ran in the given direction. When you reached the place of the battle, it was hard to believe that the shapes in red togas had once been humans.
Once of items caught your attention.
When you returned to the village, you stood terrified at the proportions of the destruction. None of the buildings remained whole, several people were lying dead in pools of blood, their limbs crashed, and backbones broken. Some of those with only flesh wounded helped to bandage those with more severe injuries.
’Someone is going to pay for this’, you thought.
’You’re right, blood will be spilled’, said the shaman, reading your mind perfectly.
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Red stuff is missing, orange stuff is wrong.
Let me know if posting this info in seperate posta is ok. I'm trying to keep this bearable to read :s
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Szeszej
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Thanks you for your work, I'll fix all of these soon
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