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jasszczur
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Test of charisma,
(the original version):
Outlaws, mutants, supernaturals. In the wastelands they gather into gangs and hunt for anything,
that is of any value.
However, those ones didn't see you, they were too busy planning a raid on nearby village.
You quickly made up your mind, ran into that village and demanded seeing with the elders.
They recognized you, it seemed that you were becoming famous. Despite of exerting yourself,
you failed to convince the elders to making ambush on the bandits. The majority of votes was
against you and they decided to pay ransom.
Screams of people being murdered accompanied you on your way to the City.
(corrected version):
Outlaws, mutants, supernaturals. In the wastelands they form gangs that hunt for anything of value.
Fortunately they didn't spot you. They were too busy planning a raid on nearby village. You quickly made up your mind, rushed to that village and demanded an audience with the elders. They recognized you. It seems you are getting famous. Despite your greatest efforts, you failed to convince them to help you ambush the bandits. The majority voted against you and decided to pay a ransom.
Screams of people being slaughtered echoed all the way back to the city.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by jasszczur: 03-01-2007 19:38.
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Szeszej
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I'll consider both versions and probably come up with a new one.
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03-01-2007 20:29 |
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Djeronimo
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Originally posted by jasszczur
Outlaws, mutants, supernaturals. In the wastelands they form gangs that hunt for anything of value.
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Its better:
Outlaws, mutants, supernaturals. In the wastelands they gather into groups that hunt for anything of value.
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03-02-2007 17:36 |
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Szeszej
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There is a new version in-game, check it 
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03-02-2007 17:53 |
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jasszczur
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gang
?noun
1. a group or band: A gang of boys gathered around the winning pitcher.
2. a group of youngsters or adolescents who associate closely, often exclusively, for social reasons, esp. such a group engaging in delinquent behavior.
3. a group of people with compatible tastes or mutual interests who gather together for social reasons: I'm throwing a party for the gang I bowl with.
4. a group of persons working together; squad; shift: a gang of laborers.
5. a group of persons associated for some criminal or other antisocial purpose: a gang of thieves.
6. a set of tools, electronic components or circuits, oars, etc., arranged to work together or simultaneously.
7. a group of identical or related items.
?verb (used with object)
8. to arrange in groups or sets; form into a gang: to gang illustrations for more economical printing on one sheet.
9. to attack in a gang.
?verb (used without object)
10. to form or act as a gang: Cutthroats who gang together hang together.
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/gang
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03-03-2007 09:00 |
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Azz420
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groups make it sound like they are knitting or reading books
gangs at least makes it sound as if they are up to no good.
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05-27-2007 03:35 |
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Szeszej
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It's already changed.
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05-27-2007 09:10 |
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DemonDude
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What about a Horde?? Very Orkish???
Or Pack, company (like soldiers) , crew, mob, syndicate, team
Maybe even clan ???
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Evangelion
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Warning for necroposting.
Fisr of all, the last reply was posted here almost a month ago.
And also the description has already been changed.
Thread closed to prevent further spam.
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