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Gendibal
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The whole night you had nightmares about monstrosities and abominations let out by the Ancient to purify the world. When you woke up in the evening, you saw a Stone growing directly from your body.

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The whole day you had nightmares about monstrosities and abominations let out by the Ancient to purify the world. When you woke up in the evening, you saw a Stone growing directly from your body.

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1: How can you wake in the evening if you've been sleeping through the night?
2: Vampires hunt at night and sleep through the day.

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Good spot, but the vampire could be a very tired vampre Tongue

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Gendibal
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ah, but to wake in the evening, even for a very tired vampire, would be impossible to do without going through either a day, or a night and a day

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Will be fixed asap Wink

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