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Gendibal
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Registration Date: 03-17-2007
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Location: Lancashire, UK
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The whole night you had nightmares about monstrosities and abominations let out by the Ancient to purify the world. When you woke up in the evening, you saw a Stone growing directly from your body.
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The whole day you had nightmares about monstrosities and abominations let out by the Ancient to purify the world. When you woke up in the evening, you saw a Stone growing directly from your body.
Reasons:
1: How can you wake in the evening if you've been sleeping through the night?
2: Vampires hunt at night and sleep through the day.
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10-08-2007 18:52 |
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Gendibal
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Registration Date: 03-17-2007
Posts: 561
Location: Lancashire, UK
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ah, but to wake in the evening, even for a very tired vampire, would be impossible to do without going through either a day, or a night and a day
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10-08-2007 19:07 |
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Szeszej
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Registration Date: 02-21-2007
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Will be fixed asap
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10-08-2007 20:28 |
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